In fact you have not broken the rule of thirds (eyes)
Nice image..

the crop could have been better [tried several but decided to abandon the ideea] but i acutally wanted the face in the middle because i really want to stress the state in which the person finds itself.

over threated grain... more artwork than a photgraph but i like ti very much!

wonderful shot

Rules are made to be broken, as long as the end result is worth it, and yours is
well done

Wow, it is very arty, Nice work! I like the feeling you convey in the photo! I wrote a poem about that once. Well done!

Artzy and nice conceptual work!

Sticks out from the common compositions, which is good!

thanks for commenting
as for the grain some is there because of exposure and light conditions[it was not a very well planned shoot-my bad] some is intentional.

Nice work! I like it

Not very well planned shot?!? I wished that my not very well planned photos all looked like this! I liked it!

Nice concept!
Carlos

nice work

I like the impression of painting and photograph joined and pinned together. The play of light across her face is very nice conceptually.

Hmm, the idea of a perpetual mind block and her curious/content smile doesn't quite fit together, in my opinion..But the image itself is really lovely. I like the the abstract red object

to killadore: the notion of mind block within this photograph: the illusion of life created in contemporary societes, the apparent state of well-being. the ignorance regarding the things that really matter in life.
clear?

I always forget the rules myself. Nice work Andrei

Good work

Interesting concept. You seem to have good ideas, yet the execution seems a bit too abstract and the visual significance rather vague at times. I'm not saying we should all start shooting flowers now, but maybe if you could get the message through in a bit more obvious way, it could improve the value of your photos quite a lot.
My opinion.